Finished Music Video - Negative feedback

As you can see from the previous post, our music video is now complete. We are very happy with final outcome, however there could have been improvements if we had a longer amount of time on the project. Firstly, the walking parts where rosa is delivering newspapers whilst singing, turned out very jumpy and not smooth. Although this gave the more personal effect as if you were part of the scene, I would have much more preferred it if we hadnt have used a monopod and maybe something to get a smoother shot. We did, however, run out of time to film and we ended up sticking with it. This problem was not major, yet it would have looked more professional if it was done differently. The second problem was the lighting in some of the shots. The indoor shots were slightly unclear, and although we made sure we focused the camera, it was a bit dark compared to the outside shots as we did not have the natural sunlight. This also happened because Rosa's bedroom did not have a ceiling light so the only light produced in the room was from her bedside lamp. Maybe if we had filmed again, we would have placed another light in the room to make the shot more clear.